Hi Jake, I really enjoyed listening to your elevator pitch. You did a phenomenal job and I really liked the way you presented your project. I liked how you came into the presentation with different statistics. However, the project did specify the importance of doing the presentation standing as if you were giving a speech to a business group for future assignments.
Hi Jake, Your elevator pitch was structured and delivered really well. The use of statistics as your introduction in regards to students taking out student loans was good because it highlighted the severity of the problem and the whos that are affected by it.Your proposal to the problem will definitely help solve the problem if executed and implemented.
Hey Jake, You had a really great elevator pitch. You came in immediately addressing the issue, and then giving real information why this truly is an issue. Your use of statistics significantly increased the impact of your elevator pitch and made me feel more aware of the problem. I think your proposal is reasonable and would help millions of students to begin their lives financially stable. Your target group is large and there are a lot of opportunities for improvement.
Hey Jake, I liked your elevator pitch because of how you addressed the issue with a bunch of statistical facts. Your proposal was also very reasonable i agree students with a proper gpa and active in the community deserve a subsidy loan. I feel like this was help even though people are leaving with debt students will not have to worry about the interest rates.
Hi Jake, I really liked your elevator pitch, I think that you did a great job explaining and presenting your ideas. Also I think that was really interesting how it did not sound like you were reading anything, it sounded like you were talking about what you know, really just expressing your ideas. Also I really like your proposal idea.
Hey Jake, I really liked how you incorporated numbers and figures into your elevator pitch. I feel like it helped to get the point across by showing real numbers and talking about just how you would plan to implement this subsidy and who would get it. I feel like you did a good job getting your point across and didn't write too long of a pitch.
Hi Jake,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed listening to your elevator pitch. You did a phenomenal job and I really liked the way you presented your project. I liked how you came into the presentation with different statistics. However, the project did specify the importance of doing the presentation standing as if you were giving a speech to a business group for future assignments.
Hi Jake,
ReplyDeleteYour elevator pitch was structured and delivered really well. The use of statistics as your introduction in regards to students taking out student loans was good because it highlighted the severity of the problem and the whos that are affected by it.Your proposal to the problem will definitely help solve the problem if executed and implemented.
Hey Jake,
ReplyDeleteYou had a really great elevator pitch. You came in immediately addressing the issue, and then giving real information why this truly is an issue. Your use of statistics significantly increased the impact of your elevator pitch and made me feel more aware of the problem. I think your proposal is reasonable and would help millions of students to begin their lives financially stable. Your target group is large and there are a lot of opportunities for improvement.
Hey Jake,
ReplyDeleteI liked your elevator pitch because of how you addressed the issue with a bunch of statistical facts. Your proposal was also very reasonable i agree students with a proper gpa and active in the community deserve a subsidy loan. I feel like this was help even though people are leaving with debt students will not have to worry about the interest rates.
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ReplyDeleteHi Jake,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your elevator pitch, I think that you did a great job explaining and presenting your ideas. Also I think that was really interesting how it did not sound like you were reading anything, it sounded like you were talking about what you know, really just expressing your ideas. Also I really like your proposal idea.
Hey Jake, I really liked how you incorporated numbers and figures into your elevator pitch. I feel like it helped to get the point across by showing real numbers and talking about just how you would plan to implement this subsidy and who would get it. I feel like you did a good job getting your point across and didn't write too long of a pitch.
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